What an interesting story. Even though there were numerous translation errors, I still could understand the story. I liked the atmosphere of the environment and I could tell that a lot of work was put into this. Good job.
Since it's fairly short, I would be happy to go through it to make it sound more natural, if you have a way for me to read and edit, like a .txt or whatnot.
Its no trouble at all, I am happy to help. I can open and see the sheet with the link in-browser, and with google docs sheets program, but I cannot edit anything. I can add comments (which aren't shown) but the actual cells are marked view only.
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What an interesting story. Even though there were numerous translation errors, I still could understand the story. I liked the atmosphere of the environment and I could tell that a lot of work was put into this. Good job.
Sorry for the inconvenience regarding the translation. I am glad you are playing with it. Thanks for your kind words.
Since it's fairly short, I would be happy to go through it to make it sound more natural, if you have a way for me to read and edit, like a .txt or whatnot.
Thank you for your comments and great suggestions.
I was not sure how to contact you, so I have created a spreadsheet. Anyone can edit this.
There is of course a .txt file available as well, similar to Ren'py's other games.
I know this is a great burden for you, so please do not hesitate to change your mind.
Its no trouble at all, I am happy to help. I can open and see the sheet with the link in-browser, and with google docs sheets program, but I cannot edit anything. I can add comments (which aren't shown) but the actual cells are marked view only.
I'm sorry!
I re-set it. How do you like it now? →URL
Thank you very much for your cooperation.